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(Belated) Monday Haiku.



My heart on my sleeves
For the world to see and play
I hope it won't hurt





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ubermunkey
Aug. 19th, 2008 01:57 pm (UTC)
well ?

Did it hurt? Or just sting a little?

My day left its mark and I'm a bit more me for it.

cheers

paterson_si
Aug. 19th, 2008 09:12 pm (UTC)
Well..... marks of all kinds are always left and present, but I always hope it's not too hard. My defence is often down, because I can feel the world easier that way.
ubermunkey
Aug. 20th, 2008 04:40 am (UTC)
AH, you are pure of heart yet, grasshopper!

I'm a bit long in the tooth and a bit
j a d e d.

Still I love life and some moments are so beautiful they pull from me some real emotion.

na
ma
st
e

paterson_si
Aug. 20th, 2008 05:53 am (UTC)
Think I am still pure of heart? :)

And I ADORE life and people in it.
ubermunkey
Aug. 20th, 2008 02:04 pm (UTC)
Yes I believe you are still pure of heart enough to keep your heart open. That is no small feet!

Your love of life comes through and I find it uplifting.

namaste

paterson_si
Aug. 20th, 2008 02:11 pm (UTC)
Oh, I've been hurt often and badly, but I can't live without my heart being open. It just doesn't work for me.

HUGS, C! Many of them.
bluebubbleblue
Aug. 19th, 2008 02:01 pm (UTC)
How could someone want to hurt such a nice and great man?

I cannot imagine that. :P
paterson_si
Aug. 19th, 2008 09:12 pm (UTC)
Oh, people do all sorts of things.
coloradofather
Aug. 19th, 2008 03:12 pm (UTC)
Caressing your sleeves
I slow down the fearful beat
so the hurt is gone
paterson_si
Aug. 19th, 2008 09:19 pm (UTC)
Leaning on your arm
The sweetness pours inside me
World is safe again
coloradofather
Aug. 19th, 2008 09:55 pm (UTC)
the strength we now share
is the gift of our friendship,
sweet yet far away.
paterson_si
Aug. 20th, 2008 06:08 am (UTC)
Sweet yet far away
But I can feel it growing
Pushing miles aside
mitjablazic
Aug. 22nd, 2008 12:55 am (UTC)
Ohh ... I'm in a melting mood.
paterson_si
Aug. 22nd, 2008 12:42 pm (UTC)
melting mood is GOOD! :)
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