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Story is a 30-part project - Part Thirteen.

So, I am back on track after my usual delay. A tiny excuse: my week at work was really intense. Really. Anyway... Boy, oh, boy, Weaver osodecanelaprovided some sentences that surely make your blood boil. :) And our story made it to part thirteen, and - as usual - you can download it HERE. Writing it is surely fun, and so is reading, I hope. I compiled the transition from 12th to 13th part and my non-LJ friend Ted (Hey, hey Teddy-O; an appointed editor) helped me with proof-reading. So... let's move it on.


I didn't manage to reply anything to that because we were suddenly too busy kissing. I was absolutely lost, busy dissolving into a puddle of sweat and desire. The feel of his hand on the back of my head, clutching me, fingers entwined in my hair, pulling my head backwards, leaving my neck exposed to him, open prey to his lips, his teeth if he so chose.


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tilia_tomentosa
Oct. 24th, 2009 02:21 pm (UTC)
Oh, just to let you know. The night after, nobody disturbed our love-making.

Tomaz, you tease! :)
paterson_si
Oct. 25th, 2009 07:45 pm (UTC)
I would never......
tilia_tomentosa
Oct. 25th, 2009 08:24 pm (UTC)
What what what? :)
paterson_si
Oct. 25th, 2009 08:58 pm (UTC)
I forgot. :)
tilia_tomentosa
Oct. 25th, 2009 09:23 pm (UTC)
tease! :)
paterson_si
Oct. 25th, 2009 09:37 pm (UTC)
As if. :)
tilia_tomentosa
Oct. 25th, 2009 09:49 pm (UTC)
and then some. :)
paterson_si
Oct. 25th, 2009 09:53 pm (UTC)
As if. :)
tilia_tomentosa
Oct. 25th, 2009 10:06 pm (UTC)
But I still love you. :)
paterson_si
Oct. 26th, 2009 10:39 am (UTC)
As if. :)
tilia_tomentosa
Oct. 26th, 2009 05:52 pm (UTC)
*arms akimbo*
*looks from above her reading glasses*

As if what, young man?
paterson_si
Oct. 26th, 2009 08:46 pm (UTC)
As if. :)
tilia_tomentosa
Oct. 26th, 2009 08:53 pm (UTC)
No comment.
paterson_si
Oct. 26th, 2009 09:29 pm (UTC)
No shit, really?
tilia_tomentosa
Oct. 26th, 2009 09:58 pm (UTC)
Even if you keep that mouth of yours closed, you can still type. :)
paterson_si
Oct. 26th, 2009 10:45 pm (UTC)
Fast. :)
tilia_tomentosa
Oct. 26th, 2009 11:46 pm (UTC)
LOL
paterson_si
Oct. 27th, 2009 12:09 am (UTC)
ROFL even
tilia_tomentosa
Oct. 27th, 2009 12:15 am (UTC)
:P
paterson_si
Oct. 27th, 2009 12:17 am (UTC)
Gotobed!
grizzlyd
Oct. 26th, 2009 04:22 pm (UTC)
you guys are so funny...hahahaha
My muse is out of reach at the time being.. sorry for not contributing till now for the new part.. I can't think of the sort of harm Ezekiel might cause to those strong characters, I thought of dart power inhibitor shots, that made them helpless, unable to defend themselves. And probably that's why they got mercilessly attacked. While captivity, our main character became aware of his powers, and why Ezekiel wanted him so badly, the experiment will become more clear. The experiment will go well, and our main character will become powerful than ever, Ezekiel's goal was to take over our main character's body (like he did in the past).. But probably His father will show up in the right time, saving him, or freeing a family member first to help him saving the main character and the others.

A lot of unsorted ideas, that I can't put together.
tilia_tomentosa
Oct. 26th, 2009 07:45 pm (UTC)
Re: you guys are so funny...hahahaha
Sorry, I've been working on my graduation paper in my native Bulgarian (anyone interested in how the yield of crude protein from wheat and triticale is influenced by the technology of growing and the predecessor crop?), and now I can barely think in English. Not to mention that I'm in a weird state of mind. But I'm becoming very good at formatting MS Excel charts. LOL

paterson_si
Oct. 26th, 2009 08:45 pm (UTC)
Re: you guys are so funny...hahahaha
Well put it in a shape, don't worry :)

THANKS
tilia_tomentosa
Oct. 29th, 2009 05:14 pm (UTC)
Re: you guys are so funny...hahahaha
Maybe Ezekiel wanted some more hawt sex with him? LOL just kidding.

If Ezekiel gets control of our character's body again, how would that refelct on Cecil?

Sorry, I have no time to think about the story properly these days. And I'm not much good at action scenes anyway. I'll wait to see what osodecanela comes up with when HE finds the time, and then maybe we'll manage to continue after him, or shape it together with him.
grizzlyd
Oct. 31st, 2009 11:36 pm (UTC)
We were driving away from Cecil's house, who stood there waving for us, with a grin on his face. I was looking back at him, waving bye bye. When I saw a red dot moving North his torso, resting on his right shoulder, before he was thrown to the ground. "NOOoooo": was all that managed to come out of me, while I was shocked in disbelief. Aunt Joan stepped on the breaks as I turned my head, there were two cars facing ours, blocking our way. She put the gear swiftly to Reverse, men were jumping out of the cars with strange looking guns with laser pointers, Marigold tried to freeze them, but she was a primary target for them. She managed to freeze them, but not before one of them has already taken his shot at her. A some sort of dart went through the front windshield and managed to hit her. Putting her into immediate sleep. The men attacking us were released from Marigold's grip, and started running towards us, while pointing their guns at Aunt Joan, who was trying to pull the dart off Marigold's body while speeding the car backwards. Time seems to stand steel while a hale of darts began penetrating the shattered car's front windshield. Meg threw herself on top of me, trying to cover and protect me. My head was turned left, Uncle Jack's head was already resting on his chest. I felt Meg's body starting to go heavier on mine. Our car hit a tree on the drive way and stopped. I was unable to move, my mind was paralyzed. I could hear footsteps crawling on both sides of the car, a loud victorious laughter that was filled with ego, I looked up and there was Ezekiel looking me in the eye while pointing his gun at me,pulled the trigger. The image started fading away as I was put into sleep like the rest of my family.
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